Well with both parts of chapter 14 now posted, I thought I'd share some thoughts on it and quite a few pictures that didn't make it.
First of all, I found chapter 14 very difficult to write, especially the first part, mainly because it was game-play based rather than plot based. I find having a plot for a chapter makes things so much more fluid to write, so I came up with some character based scenes to 1 make it easier for me and 2 try to drive the chapter along. I'm pleased with how they turned out, and I hope that you all enjoyed reading them.
Something else I wanted to do with this chapter was to start pushing Edward to the fore, whilst having William step back, but not disappear completely because there were still things I wanted him to do. I'm happy with the balance I've struck, and I think that my readers should now feel like they know Edward, and will look forward to him taking over from William.
Ok, onto some pictures I think:
Gosh that's a lot of pictures, Hope you liked them.