Aw, thank you. *blushes* I really would like to continue with this, and even go back and revisit what I've already written and try to make it into a more cohesive story.
*Nodnod* That is totally valid and one thing that I will look at closely if I do go back and revisit what I've already written is the structure of the narrative. I have been worrying about it going back and forth, and although it makes sense in my head, and might work if it's read in one go, I was worrying that it would feel bitty. I think as well, that at the moment, the Graceful, and especially Cahlleehn are much clearer in my mind than Esmond and Irene, and that comes across in how I've written the characters. And yes. They are faerie. I've not pinned down all their features yet, but they are definitely fae.
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Date: 2012-08-14 08:41 pm (UTC)*Nodnod* That is totally valid and one thing that I will look at closely if I do go back and revisit what I've already written is the structure of the narrative. I have been worrying about it going back and forth, and although it makes sense in my head, and might work if it's read in one go, I was worrying that it would feel bitty. I think as well, that at the moment, the Graceful, and especially Cahlleehn are much clearer in my mind than Esmond and Irene, and that comes across in how I've written the characters. And yes. They are faerie. I've not pinned down all their features yet, but they are definitely fae.