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Go Fish 2012 - part four
Aug. 6th, 2012 09:17 pmTitle: Go Fish 2012: Part Four
Prompt: High Fantasy
Rating: PG
Summary: Insidious.
Notes: I'm not too pleased with this part all told. I think the pacing might be off, and some of the language is stilted, but I want to post it since I've been looking at it for three days now and getting nowhere with editing it. I'm starting to wonder if I've been looking at it too long, and that I need to let it go.
Word Count: 1,706.
Cumulative Word Count: 7,793.
( “If you wanted to play with them, you should not have let them run off." )
Prompt: High Fantasy
Rating: PG
Summary: Insidious.
Notes: I'm not too pleased with this part all told. I think the pacing might be off, and some of the language is stilted, but I want to post it since I've been looking at it for three days now and getting nowhere with editing it. I'm starting to wonder if I've been looking at it too long, and that I need to let it go.
Word Count: 1,706.
Cumulative Word Count: 7,793.
( “If you wanted to play with them, you should not have let them run off." )
